Today was the third and final class spent on this project. In my demo we talked about how I might make the narrative of my image clearer by creating more of a focal point and other indications of how a viewer should read the image.
Some of the ideas we came up with were making the boys had a more saturated red, adding red (compliment of green grass) flowers to the ground around the boys feet for more hue contrast and adding a rope between the boy's hand the deer to create more of a direct visual pathway from the boy to the deer. I also tried making the rope a little light as it got close to the deer to see if that gradation would also help create more movement along the rope.
We also had a critique.
For the next project I want to focus on color. This week collect collage elements that have interesting color - find as wide a variety as possible.